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With Me Always

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Long ago lost to me was
    a family feeling,
Sending my heart and soul
    reeling.
Not knowing just where to
    turn,
So much my heart and mind
    deeply yearn.
Those thoughts and feelings
    were all mine,
Never thought again the sun
    would shine.
Then while alone with my
    thoughts,
I realized they gave things which
    can never be bought.
I carry them with me wherever
    I go,
It is them within me everyday
    I happily show.
They are not lost , never far
    away,
For their love, understanding, compassion
    forever with me will stay.

Author notes

Please don't let the sadness get you down, times will be hard sometimes. Just let your heart open and you will find their love there helping you, lifting you up. You are never alone my dear, they are with you always.

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  • A63-Angel
    November 19
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    this was beautiful and would have fit so perfectly into the contest I was doing that I just judged today. guess I stumbled upon this for a reason because this was just what I needed to hear right now.


    • Puppydog gold member
      November 19
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      HELLO A63-ANGEL

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading this one. I hope my thoughts and words bring some peace and comfort to this young lady and also to you.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 13

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    My condolences for the loss of your parents...

    This is a beautiful, heart-felt tribute to your family. I also lost both of my parents in 2003, and I still think about them, and I miss them alot. I totally understand how alone it must feel for you. My best wishes are with you always, Kevin. May you find peace and a bit of comforting solace in the love all around you every day.
    Peace & Hugs,
    Cyn

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 14
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      HELLO CYNTHIA

      Thanks ever so much for coming by and reading! The young lady this is for lost her parents recently and has so much heartache and pain to deal with. I sincerely hope my words here can bring to her some little comfort. 's


  • darlee77 gold member
    November 13

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    This may be a little sad, but shows a lot of promise and hope. It did make me a little nostalgic. And you are right, we are never alone. Very good.


  • condor gold member
    November 7

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    Such a beautiful and thoughtful write that speaks very much from the heart. I know from reading so manty of oyur pieces how generous a man you are of heart and you tend to feel what others are feelings. It is no less here. So sad when one loses a member of their family. It takes so long to come to terms with and seems to be on the mind constantly. But as you say in your authors notes, they are not gone...but travel with us throughout our lives, watching over us. This was just so beautiful and such a caring write. I wish you all the very best in the contest and thank you for sharing with us.

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 7
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      HELLO CONDOR

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading this! I hope my words bring some comfort and peace to her. I truly know that lonely feeling, one of emptiness also. Time is a good friend and as it passes one pushes the sorrow away and begin to remember the good memories.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 6

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    You are such a giving and caring
    man. I hope she finds peace and
    comfort in your thoughtful words.
    The comment in your AN shows
    further the kind man you are.
    Good luck in the contest,
    although I know this wasn't
    written for that reason.

    Jeannie

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 6
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      HELLO JEANNIE

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading this I do pray my words do bring some comfort to her, knowing though only time eases the heartache and sorrow. 's One when faced with similar experiences can in a small way feel what they feel, many lose family who they love very much. One with time realizes they are not gone, that they reside in their heart. 's

  • Brook-1 gold member
    November 6

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    This is a nice poem to someone who has lost their parents. You must be very kind to write like this. Thank you for letting me have the opportunity to read into your heart.
    Brook

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 6
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      HELLO BROOK-1

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading! I do hope my words bring to her some comfort. So much to deal with and no one should have to go through such things but so often we do. 's

  • Everyone has bad times, but if we'd dwell on the good and the happy instead of the bad then we'd be much better off. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in all you do.


    • Puppydog gold member
      November 6
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      HELLO BEAUTIFUL-N-BROKEN

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading. I do hope my words give her some inspiration and hope.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    November 5

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    Amen, Kevin. A beautiful write. Fantastic. You have stated words in which we should live by with all that is going on in the world these days. Thank you for sharing you wise wisdom with us. Keep the ink flowing with such positive thoughts. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 5
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      HELLO DONNA

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading I sincerely hope I brought to her some peace and calm. Its never easy losing a loved one and to lose more than one at the same time is so difficult. I can understand what she may be going through a little as my own experience was similar. 's


  • darlee77 gold member
    November 5
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    Very beautiful and wise writing. Good rhyme and flow. Very good.

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 5
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      HELLO DARLEEN

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading. One feels for those who are experiencing what they themselves have in the past.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 5

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    You are so compassionate

    your heart shows in your lovely write

     

    you give comfort so beautifully

     

    God bless you my friend...

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 5
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      HELLO KATHLEEN

      Thank you so very much for coming by and reading One finds it is not hard to feel what another feels at a time like this when they themselves have been through similar experiences . 's


  • Melodies
    November 4

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    A sincerely beautiful poem with a message of great value. You write in a forthright and honest way that warms the heart of the reader. BRAVO!

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 5
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      HELLO MELODIES

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading. When one has been in much the same situation it becomes easier to understand and reach out and help.

  • Bob Fox
    November 4

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    Kevin

    Such wonderful thoughts and memories should always be cherished. Those, like myself, denied such flowers of life can only wish and wonder. Great write poet.


    • Puppydog gold member
      November 4

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      HELLO BOB

      Thanks ever so much for coming by and reading I do hope my words bring a little comfort to them.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 4

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    Beautiful write Kevin

    So true are your words here and yes if we always think they are forever gone within our sorrows we dont let ourselves feel their embrace from within

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 4
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      HELLO PATTY

      Thank you ever so much for coming and reading Yes, they are always with us, in our hearts, our memories and our love. Never are they far away! 's


  • WhyMeWhyMe
    November 4

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    I like this. Thank you.

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 4
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      HELLO WHYMEWHYME

      Thank you so much and you are sincerely welcome! 's You are not alone for we all have lost in our lives Our loved ones are with us always, they are in our hearts, our memories and our love , they are never far away. 's

  • Alexander.CL
    November 4

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    nice piece, i've got a lot of time for it. the community has shown a strong collective front for kelsey, are thoughts are with her.

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 4
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      HELLO ALEXANDER.CL

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading I know how it feels as so many do, this is something which is never easy to get through. One must open their hearts and feel their love which will be with them always.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 4

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    this is stunning Kevin so heart felt hun for you shine in prayers from above hugs always Angel♥♥

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 4
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      HELLO ANGELBELLEROSE

      Thank you so much for coming by and reading I believe we all have lost loved ones in our lives. Never is it easy to go on with our lives but one thing we feel deep in our hearts. They are with us always, never far away, helping us each and every day. 's


  • Wandering Woman gold member
    November 4

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    So inspiring

    Thank you! It's just what my soul was yearning for today, hope, and remembrance that love of family is always with us.

    • Puppydog gold member
      November 4
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      HELLO WANDERING WOMAN

      Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading We lose our loved ones through death but truly they are with us always in spirit and love helping us face each day. 's

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