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My Pain

Pain lives in the soul,
And its hard to let go,
Of hurt words,
Death is on the air tonight.

If you ask me,
Well  no,
Im not alright,
But oh, well.

Who would care anyway,
If i chose to leave today,
I sit right here i am so near. 

But i am fragile and
I have shattered,
So know im gone,
But what does it matter?

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  • GAYxPRIDEx4xLIFE
    November 22
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    amazering

    trulely terrific!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • ash003
    November 22
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    beautifull

    such a great poem.........good job!

  • xXxFireGirlxXx
    November 12

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    WOW

    i wish i could write like you! im trying to write stuff but i just cant think of any. study hall... help me?

  • kiki2732
    November 6
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    wow!! this was amazing!!! it truely did touch me thank you!


  • PerfectlyBroken
    November 4

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    A painfully beautiful work. My favorite part has to be "But I am fragile and I have shattered so know i'm gone, But what does it matter?"

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