why did you take her away
sign the piece of paper
to make sure she gets gone
why couldnt you see
how much we loved her
and how much
we miss her?
are you blind
to what you have done
with pen and paper?
can you not see
how you have
broken our hearts
and torn our souls?
why would you
ever sign
such a wonderful girl
away like that?
you have to understand
now and forever
that you have just taken away
something so extremely
important to us
that we will never forgive
our hearts
they're breaking
our souls
they're frying
can you not see
how blind you were
to send her away?
if you can
and if you understand
bring her back
bring her back to us
take the paper
rip it up
shred it
so it is like it never was
just bring her back
bring her back
bring her back to us
A contest entry
- They've takin you away and my heart my break by Mirrors fan.
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Comments
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Nice
The poem was pretty good...a lot longer then i wanted cuz i only get 15 minuties a day to be online and read poems though. -
when i read this i see a family that is about to be broken up, cause they can't take care of their youngest girl. it is said but in some cases that is the fact. you hear more about the bad times when a child is taken away, from a neglectful home, but what about those who are trying, you never really know keep it flowing
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