justice
impartial, lawful
upstanding, uncorrupting, fitting
meticulous, principled, biased, intolerant
discriminating, slanting, hurting
unfair, abusive
injustice
Author notes
Diamante form:
Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subect
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subect
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subect,
two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject
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A contest entry
- Bandit Only November Form Contest by The Poetic Bandits.
900 points, ended November 28, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How do you think I could improve this poem?
Comments
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I think you show a strong contrast between the two words and your form is good. Good word selection and display, thanks for your entry.
Dennis
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Words are so true and strong, but pity it lacks a bit in the diamant shape.
~Titia~
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You know it really didn't occur to me that the name diamante meant diamond-shaped. I don't know what I was thinking. You are absolutely correct...like an etheree it should be more artistic. Thank you for your comment.
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If you could find three shorter words for line 5, in total about the same length as line 3, it would turn into a diamond shape. Love the context.
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Oh I do love where this form went! A very clever piece and I think this form is just perfect for it. I have to agree upon your ideal of justice and the reality. Bravo and best wishes in this contest
Gaylene
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