The chains that binds us to our convictions
The love that enables us to endure friendship's
The strength to balance our fears
The hope that carries us to faraway dreams
Unspoken Words
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You have indeed said so much in
32 words! Each line has it's own
deep and profound message,
bringing together an incredible
piece of inspiration. Well done!
Thanks for sharing.
~Jeannie
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Contemporary speaking the poem is really nice. I like how effective the poem is in its short/limited rendition of thoughts. My only thought, I think their is an excess usage of article - 'the' in this piece.
Other than that, I this is okay.
Thanks and regards,
Hensley
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these chains that tie the heart and soul to all mankind is binding in so many ways. and to the ones you love always a well received embrace well said hun Hugs Angel♥
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Ah. love and emotion speaking silently...
Nicely phrased, dear Susan!
Love and hugs,
M-C
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It's amazing what can be said in just 32 words. Wonderful job and best luck in the contest.
~Amanda~
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Vey good, a nice thought to be practiced.
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words that mean so much...wonderfully said
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sometimes what we dont say lies beneath our breath without words nor convictions...still we can feel inside something more surreal
be it love that has become dormant or a burst of light
just waiting for a moonlight night
to shine
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great job on
the contest prompt, 32 words of wonder, keep penning sis, it works well for you...good luck
Linda
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Wonderful
Very creative use of 32 words. such a great write. Best of luck in the contest
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Wow, you have said so much in just 32 words sis. Great job...Best of luck in the contest.
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