Yesterday brought roses, champagne and you,
today brings...
pre-nuptial agreements, mortgage payments,
diapers, college funds,
and a splitting headache...
today brings...
pre-nuptial agreements, mortgage payments,
diapers, college funds,
and a splitting headache...
Author notes
Finish this in 11 words:
Yesterday brought roses, champagne and you,
today brings...
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie...8 poets...10 minutes...11 words...finish this ...thought by islekine.
700 points, ended November 4, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I pour my heart and soul into these writes, least you can do is comment.
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
Very funny and a great use of 11 words. Congrats on silver trophy -- nice work!


-
nice job on grabbing the silver
best wishes
Love
Passionspromise

-
mmm.. he looks like Brad Pitt.. hehe.


-
ooohhhh Nice
love your take on this!! DD Xx
goodluck huni


-
AHHHH
Went for the sad truth for many! Well penned...thanks for sharing!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...

and



-
AHHHH
Went for the sad truth for many! Well penned...thanks for sharing!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...

and



-
Very well done, my best wishes.


-
Wow
my goodness not a happy ending. Best of luck in the contest

-
Wow, so true! great work


1 - 9 of 9









