Yesterday brought roses, champagne and you, today brings..
thorns in the carpet, bubbles on floors and 'i love you's'
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Finish: Yesterday brought roses, champagne and you, today brings..
with 11 words
Its saying that even though things go wrong, I love you will always be right.
Thanks for reading
[title from RENT]
A contest entry
- Quickie...8 poets...10 minutes...11 words...finish this ...thought by islekine.
700 points, ended November 4, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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love it
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Beautiful write Kira! A gold trophy well deserved for your imagery and word choice which as always us superb
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This was so cute. I really think this is another one of your best ones recently. Just something about it is really mesmerizing. Beautiful piece you have here. Loved it.
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awww such a loving take to this; great work
xx DD goodluck in the contest
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Very well done, my best wishes.
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Excellent
oh my what a write. Great job. Best of luck in the contest
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Bubbles on the floor? I think you need a shower enclosure on the tub.
You could slip and break something that way you know!!! Well done and best of luck to you... Scott
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I really really enjoyed this!
Thanks...you put a smile on my face...well penned!
*Thanks for entering my contest...best wishes always!
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I really really enjoyed this!
Thanks...you put a smile on my face...well penned!
*Thanks for entering my contest...best wishes always!
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