I wrote LOVE today,
LOVE on my arm
LOVE in big letters
etched into my skin
Left behind tears
with little LOVE in between
LOVE in my mind
LOVE on my arm
I havn't felt this way
in a very long time
And now that I have slipped up but once,
it's always lingering in mind
Jesus Christ,
my almighty savour,
I wrote LOVE on my arm
because I wish to give it to you
You bleed and died
up on that cross
And my tribute to you is
is this LOVE on my arm
Left on my arm,
not in blood
But in scars
For upon your body
were countless scars
Because you left us with LOVE
and that's all that I need
Author notes
Wrote: October 19, 2009
I had a bad day at school. Insteadof screaming it all out, I wrote LOVE on my arm in red pen, like i have done before. This definitally isn't like my usual, for I don't usually include religion, but just this once i decided to "take a whack at it" I kno that Jesus bled and died on the cross to save us and he did it out of pure Love ♥
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In the third stanza, first line "havn't" should be "haven't". The word "saviour" is spelled wrong in the 4th stanza, and also in that stanza "bleed" should be "bled".
Other than that this is a terrific write. You did a great job on it. Keep on writing and good luck in all you do -
really amazing... it remindes me of To Write Love On Her Arm.. gj
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thats what i was trying to start off as then it turned into ccd class♦
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Wow this is amazing and very deep. I can feel the emotion behind ur words. I Wish i couldve been there to help you but this is amazing. im happy ur finding easier ways to control ur anger. im proud of u =D love yah cuz. keep writing
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