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Welcome to morning











Dawn swallows midnight

and the lights left on
                                for you.















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Prompt - picture. 55 characters - one sentence

(its 55 if you count the spaces )

likey?

A contest entry

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    November 14

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    Ooh I love the imagery in this piece. Its beautiful, heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time. Well done. Thanks for sharing.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 6

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    Ah, I love how so much can be said with so few words. I really liked it. Great job on this and best of luck to you in the contest



    -Steve-

    • Nakatrea
      November 6
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      well when you only get 55 letters you gotta make them count right?


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 6

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    picture perfect!! great job!

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