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Now Forever

Emerald glow
From sunlight within
Leaning ‘round
A circular bend
Onward going
Never slowing
Never stopping
Never end

No end, thus no beginning
No future and no past
Only ‘now’ forever
A moment that never lasts

Yet somehow
Never leaves
Static ‘till…
Waiting for…
The end
That never comes

How's the title? (And can anyone guess what this poem was inspired by?)

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  • edens-envy
    November 8

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    The title works well. There's a certain poise to the phrasing that I like and I like the way it leaves you kind of, dangling off a hook. What was the inspiration? I'm curious.


    • Stone Rose
      November 10
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      Haha, No one would ever be able to guess what the inspiration was.
      The clue is in the first four lines.
      I wrote this that day when my class was canceled and I had four hours of nothing to do.
      The inspiration was the power button on the computer XD


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    November 5

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    aww, goodness this is beautiful i think the title goes with it perfectly! i love the style in which it was written too, very flowing. great job

    kass