Dreams become reality in a
realm of make believe, as I
wade through the fog of loneliness
searching for tenderness
and affection, beyond fears,
rejection and self abasement
as shadowed silhouette's
brush against my salacious
yearnings for love
with sweet kisses dipped
in the fragrant scent of
feminine essence
alluring my soul into
a transient state of exotic
madness and exhilaration
pulse fluttering like butterflies
wings in flight, amidst a mystic forest
of fireflies scattered in darkness
as I toss and turn in this
fantasy of wishful longing,
in the middle of nowhere
A contest entry
- Prompt For You #4 by Jeremy0826.
1900 points, ended November 25, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Brilliant work here with some wonderful imagery!
Thank you very much for your entry and good luck
to you with it here. I appreciate it!
Jeremy0826 -
Mmmm...i enjoyed reading you my friend gud luck !!!!
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with sweet kisses dipped
in the fragrant scent of
feminine essence <---- sweet stanza
best of luck in this contest, it deserves a shiny...
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V.Good
Fluid, Sensual. Passionate. Wonderful imagery, my favourite line is: "a mystic forest
of fireflies scattered in darkness."
Wouldn't change anything. Well done.
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Illminated glow enlightens passions intent
With flitter they do their forbidden dance
From dusk till down for a limited review
Two fireflies entranced in a deep embraced
I simply loved your poem and felt it was wonderfully written, I enjoyed it from start to finsh and could feel every word, my favorite stanzas was
alluring my soul into
a transient state of exotic
madness and exhilaration
pulse fluttering like butterflies
wings in flight, amidst a mystic forest
of fireflies scattered in darkness
wonderful write and i wish you much luck in the contest xoxo
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