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Mirror, mirror

Mirror mirror on the wall
Who's the fairest of them all

Who is it I want to be

What is it I have to see

To be forever free

Of this hateful jealousy

 

How many pounds must I loose

To have the figure that I choose

Flat abs and skinny legs

But my stomach begs, and begs.

 

To be fed and i surrender

Knowing I cannot be slender

Hate and pain are all i feel

For my body far from ideal.

And I question every day

How much longer I can stay

Within my world of hate and pain 

I worry about the weight I gain

Before I try to end it all

And end up in the hospital

There may be even worse ahead

I'll end up on my dying bed.

 

Soon I fear my life will be,

just a painful memory.

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