She sat there, warmed by the flames of desire,
words of love caressing her mind,
bringing heat to her very soul,
from pages of rose tinted lines, forevermore.
Subdued light casting sweet shadows across her skin,
and chilled wine keeping the heat at bay,
a penny for her thoughts lay for the taking,
but inside, she knew she was deeply loved.
The voice of one had whispered to her heart,
through lyrical verse he displayed his passion,
his sincerity, his commitment to care for her,
knowing that he watched over her, she sighed.
Tending for her every care,
she knew he was there,
cultivating new seeds of love,
to make her hearts garden bloom,
and the tears of joy would bring harvests of passions delight.
A contest entry
- Passions & Griswold's Phrase prompt by Griswold.
900 points, ended November 21, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
go on, you know you want too....
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Very well done an excellent take on the prompt. A very tender and loving write to the one you love which is as it should be for all. Thank you for entering and best of luck... Scott
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A simply beautiful piece.
I loved this
Good luck in the contest
Passionspromise
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This poem is very sweet and passionate. I wish I saw more poems like this every day.
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'. . .but inside, she knew she was deeply loved;' Don't we all wish it was that way for us? To have someone who truly loves us, watches over us. So soft, so heartfelt!!!
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OH! sweetheart this is simply breath taking
my sweet Voice that watches over me, my love who has set me free, your tender words caress my heart and makes me long for you all the more
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