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Betrayed


I guess she was your asian goddess,
the unknown you wanted to explore.
Your eyes that sparkled on your departure,
are the ones I quite don't know anymore.

Could she have denied your pursuit,
so your ship returned to stay?
Well, please sir don't play anymore,
with the one that you betrayed.

I felt the chill in your embrace,
the love had left your eyes.
You had already set sail,
by the time that I realized.

I felt lonely without your embrace,
as I pictured you in her's, there's nothing
like that feeling of losing the one you love
I never thought that you'd return.

But the moment your ship hit my shore,
I felt nothing but enraged, go ahead
just turn back now, explore another place
for I need at least my dignity,

you've taking everything else away.

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  • jaguar
    November 4
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    Wow, I got shivers. I'm sorry for the muse but it's a powerful piece.