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monolithic scare


In the obscure sound of obscurity
The serene hollow ground
Is deprecated and manipulated
By the hidden depths of madness
Fear sets alight, a manic depression
Obsession rules the heart in no mans land
Love lost, confused and abused beyond all reason
Searching for one moment, one touch from someone special
In an age when caring is just as mirrored as dying
Flesh withers and taunts
Revered in darkness
Bone heaved and mastered
In the hollow channels of human sadness
Deeply penetrated in one monolithic scare
The shock all too great
The moment all too fearful

in one final masterful stroke 

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    1 day ago
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    Wonderful work here! Thank you for your entry in my contest.
    I appreciate it and wish you all the best with it here. Keep up
    the wonderful work!




    Jeremy0826

  • Macsword
    November 5

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    It's been a while

    seeing your writes on my favorites list. Good to see this. I read this twice and this portion:

    Obsession rules the heart in no mans land
    Love lost, confused and abused beyond all reason
    Searching for one moment, one touch from someone special
    In an age when caring is just as mirrored as dying

    has meaning for me in a land where people die, and "care" means little.