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This is a reaction, make it a reflex.

Your scent is oddly real,
intoxicating --
lacking in artificial nonsense.

Never would I have thought
that the faint smell of cigarettes
would bring me comfort.
It lifts me to my toes
as the excitement quickens time.

I indulged myself in your warmth,
where everything was in perfect balance:
your humor and my heart rate
my movements and your reactions.

When we walked away from our dance floor,
part of me stayed there in a wax puddle.
Her voice brought an unexpected touch
that I would kill to have every few minutes.

A joke to trigger a mind boggling
small pressure to my forehead.

Turn it into a reflex;
I'd say the magic word
a thousand times a day. 

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  • sgking123 silver member
    November 8
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    wow

    real and natural scents....whodunnit..kinda stuff..and you desire them s clearly.....draping them with perfumes of variety can really hide what some long to nose.loved this super poem.wish you would visit me and see what I write.

  • Haha sooo glad you referred to me too in this poem


  • Fireworks
    November 6
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    And yet you wouldn't explain to me.


  • Treefingers
    November 4
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    YES!

  • ZachofDoom
    November 4
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    explain. now.

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