Would you...
Lay under the stars?
Dance in the rain?
Watch the moon?
Feel the wind?
If you are with me.
Embrace the ocean?
Sit in the storm?
Play in the sand?
Eat the snow?
Only if we're together.
I don't know how you feel.
I don't know how i feel.
We can watch the world revolve
As long as I am with you...
Author notes
idk, if you guys are like this but i am. i cant help myself. i know the poem sucks- but i needed to vent.
feedback?
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its really good. its far from sucking
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It's a cute poem. It does not suck. And you can always elaborate on it later on. The great thing is is that you can feel the emotion behind it.
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awe, cute. i really like it kimber. =D
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