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As the leaves fall

There's something new
Inside of you
I can't seem to figure it out
Just yet but I bet
That things will turn around
I'll see that frown turn uspide down
You care
As the leaves fall
I find you
Standing beside a tree
Underneath a shooting star
Just for Me

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