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No

Do you hear
the little girl crying
at school
when she could be with her
"friends"?

Do you see
the cut marks
on her wrist
that never seem to
go away?

Do you ever think
that she's not ok
that she's giving up
and that she's
done with life?

Do you wonder
why she is depressed,
if you even noticed that?

Do you imagine
what it would be like
without her to make fun of
and without her to laugh at?

Do you try
to look through her eyes
and see how broken she is
or ever try to help?

NO.
you never do.

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  • peterh360
    November 19
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    a very good 1 keep going


  • Memmy-94
    November 6
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    Brillant Job !

    Very Deep !

    Peace.
    Hugs and Luv.
    Hope and Healing.
    xxXxx


  • kryz
    November 4
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    Very deep. Great job

  • great poem, people never notice, its true


  • a dying soul x
    November 4
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    very good

  • Fabulous. loved it.

  • i can relate

    the same things happen to me my so called friends call me emo and i telll them emos are nothing to laugh at we are deppressed people! i try to tell them im not emo but they dont believe me even my close friends think i am emo! its hard to lie to people who once saw scars and cuts on my wrist

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