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Two

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Two nations fused in blood and bone
Entwines two hearts to beat as one
Apache Blackfoot unison   
Keep sheltered from the rain and storm

Beneath these skies, these two, now one
In flesh and spirit and in between
Both touch one earth and call the sun
Sweet sacred souls upon the wings of love


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  • This piece is amazing and I hope that you will enter it in my other contest but as for this one I am afraid that I already have my gold. Thanks for entering.


  • guardianhost gold member
    November 14

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    Perfectly Penned!!!

    A Brilliant Write, Spot On !!! A complete and amazing poem!!! Well Done!!!!
    This was the very type of gift I had hoped for in honoring both Connie & Tim in their heritage,


  • CaptainAwesome
    November 4
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    very sweet. Job well done.