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Take Over Your soul.

All I wanted was for you to leave.
Instead you lifted up your sleeve,
Grabbed the needle and put it in.
I lost you that night, the drugs win.
It happened so fast, I lost control.
I watched drugs take over your soul.
You left me stunned, this is not you.
Because of this, you and I are through.
You had the nerve to try & take your life.
You don’t deserve to be a mom or wife.

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mehhh, so my mom decided to do 1200$ of crack in front of me in one day. Let's just say this is the first thing I wrote to her when we got home.
P.S- my mom is an lpn nurse, and has been sober for many, many years...

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  • Suge
    November 4

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    Amazing

    I cannot believe how sad but brilliant this poem was. I, too, have been affected by someone else's drug use and it sucks. I'm sorry you had to go through it to but I hope that it has a happy ending. This was a well written poem and I felt you in these words.

  • jurnAy7
    November 4
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    wow thats deep great write