the rewards of a meal
well eaten is a colon
well cleansed...
push....
push harder....
a little harder still
once more with feeling
Push!
ah sweet relief I wonder what's for dessert?
A contest entry
- Prompt: Short and Sweet by mysticstorm.
450 points, ended November 4, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I like the way you are using the font size to creat soft and loud sounds in the piece! It shows how formatting can actually aid the poet to get sensory ideas across to the reader. Nice work.
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That's my Doc! 
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Hey Miss Buddy, do you think I'm a little
obsessed??? says the woman with bowel of irritation???
doc
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Yes, me thinks you have an obsession with . If you get to the point where you are smearing it, well then I think you need to get some help, otherwise I think you're still in the mild category. (Yes, people really do that, don't even ask me why, I don't know. I think the medical term for it is "poop smearing.")
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what a comedian you are and for that I give you cerdit...brilliant in it's owe right.
mystic
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