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Namaste

Together as spirit we rise above
leaving behind only the shell that gave us earthly form
Flesh and bones
no more

We are free in spirit now
unrestricted
Still holding firm to each other
watching as history unfolds
Our past exposed

Lovers in Earthly flesh
released to freedom in the spiritual kingdom
The circle of life an adventure
a journey back to enlightenment
now learned

Our freedom Our love
Our memories
They will always be
As in life we were as one
As in spirit so it remains

Namaste

Author notes

NAMASTE means you are in me and I am in you. We are as one.

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  • Oh wow. I love this write and the name of it. I didn't know what it meant of course until I got to your authors notes. You really did an amazing job with this prompt. Great write and good luck in the contest.


  • Nicada silver member
    November 4

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    This is so beautiful, and the message is so comforting. We are all connected, and you remind of that message very nicely here. Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing it. Blessings, Patty