I wish I may
I wish I might
tickle your fancy
on this very night.
I see all the stars
when I look at the sky
the thoughts I have
make me want to cry.
I hear the baby
as she starts to cry
I scoop her up
and wonder why.
We both start to cry
as at each other we glance
and we look back at her
and know we have a chance.
plz tell me {honestly but nicely} what you think of this poem
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I really liked it. I like your style. It's very unique in the way you weave the words. I think it is very creative
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lol.
i want a baby now!!
hha
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its owsum, emotinos depicted finely. Butiful!
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I love your poem sis. It is sad and beautiful. I love how you wrote this. Although I think that you should take out "we" in this line "as at each other we glance". Just to make your poem more beautiful sis. Loves and Peace!
-Jess
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Very beautiful and so sad. This poem is full of emotions and I love your rhyme in it. Lovely work here my dear and thanks for sharing it!
Jeremy0826
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last stanza is amazing-ness.
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wow i love this its so full of emotion
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awe....... !!!
my sister had a dream that her baby was a raccoon
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