I look into your perfect eyes
Like I hoped, they show no lies
My little heart flutters faster
As it makes a little pitter patter
The way you see me
Has only shocked me
You're the angel of my dreams
That I was too blind to see
The only fear I'll have with you
Is fear the day that I might lose you
But you've assured me
That you won't leave me be
It'll forever be
You and me
So hold me tight
And I just might
Whisper to you
My only truth...
I Love You
Author notes
wrote it in 6th hour. give opinion please.. 4 my bf
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Awww
this is touching and beautifully written... Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Best of luck!
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terrific..it relates exactly...great job
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Such a beautiful piece and to have written, it for someone special. Just makes, it that much more special. Good luck in the contest. Take care and have a great day.
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yeah... i did write it for someone special... he writes me poems and i respond with one
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