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Dormant lay my spines

Dormant lay my spines, waiting ever so patiently for you to land,
Down from a fragrance,something attracts the eye as bright pedals expand,
Landing you realize you got what you wanted a little to soon,
Spines slam shut, spraying you with poison that you wish you had already been immune,
Releasing you from my slimy grasp, you gasp for air though the thick excrement,
I watch you dissolve, waiting for the creaming inner content,
Consuming you whole, the digestion process has begun,
Now that I've had my fill, I guess I'll shit out your skeleton


...burp 

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dunno venus fly trap I guess, my shit is usually not this short

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  • penman gold member
    January 26
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    Interesting

    It is short, but very descriptive. So very raw and well written. Thank you for sharing