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I,You,We,They

I know you love me
I know you really do
I know we need set free
I know you're my cue.

You know I love you
You know I really do
You know we're free
You know Im your cue.

We know it will occur
We know we will marry
We know not to stir
We know it's alot to carry.

They know it will occur
They know we will marry
They know not to order
They know they're not scary.

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 6

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    Wow. this poem was absolutely brilliant. Definitely one of the best works I have read in quite a while. I like how you used I then You then We and ended with They. It showed how everyone felt about the same thing. Very nicely done.



    -Steve-



  • Xxcant runxX
    November 4
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    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    November 4
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    -hug- adorable hon.


  • Syko Path
    November 4
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    awe so cute!

    is this why you havnt replied to my message yet???