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When Our Eyes Connected

When my eyes first glazed upon her i thought " Wow, this is new"
My heart started to race for the first time
that feeling of so much all at once
that curious feeling, that feeling of warmth and nervousnees
it washes over you and makes you feel so many things
this first feeling of love
more of a kinda prelove
kind of a playful silly feeling
but so real and serious at the same time
So complex these feelings, the mind races
what to say to her?
Why am i feeling this?
seems kinda dumb
all i had to do was see the "signs"
she feeling this to
you not noticing just concentrating on what to do around her
do anything to not let her see this side of you
you dont even know what it is
afraid she might not like it or....
reject you
reject you
Fear
dont want to let her go
dont want to screw this up
put on a front to not let her see you scarred
acting normal
but time went by
started to let the wall down and she makes you feel safe
makes you feel more comfortable
makes you feel like...you
even if you dont know what "you" feels like
Mind goes crazy
wanting her to see you
to notice you
to care about you as much as you are of her
sleepless nights planning the next day
what is she going to wear
what is she goin to say to me
what if i dont know how to respond
what if i dont say what she wants to hear
planning
planning
every possible conversation mapped out
Day arrives and excitment washes away the fear of rejection
seeing her at her locker
she looks amazing
if only i could tell her without causeing suppision
walk up to her youve been holding your opening words in your mouth for what seems like forever
every last letter on the tip of your tounge
you walk up
she sees you
shes looking at you
her eyes meet yours
she sees you for who you are
not what youve been planning on portraying all night all mourning, and now
she says good mourning
the sweetest voice ive ever heard
i can hear it now
i can see her now
i can feel those words float through me
just as they did then and still do now
falling for her
hard
faster
more and more each day
till cant keep it in anymore and just befor you tell her
just befor you open up to her
befor you let her know how much she means to you
she tells you
'i think im falling in love with you'

she takes the words straight from you
straight from your heart
straight from this new beating heart that she has
filled with joy and happiness
she feels the same
RELIEF
i got a shot with this feeling this...love
thats what it is she said it took the words straight outta me
she feels love with me
because of me
with me
i cant begin to explain the happiness
the warmth inside to know that
we can be now
and not fear
REJECTION
free to be yourself
but youve been yourself all this time
shes freed you and shown you life
she started your heart
she is my everything
loveing her
her loving me
her making me feel like i am the only person that matters
when she looks at me with those beautiful thruthfull loving eyes
she is my life my world and my whole heart
i would be nothing without her
and everything is nothing without her
this feeling is unexplainable
true love
forever and always
shell be in my heart for the rest of ever
i love her and i wish there was a stronger words but the words still feels as strong as it did the first day we used them
still makes me smile inside and out
SHE MAKES ME HAPPY,  MAKES ME... ME
SHE IS MY ANGEL
MY ONE AND ONLY
MY EVERYTHING
And ill hold on to her forever
and looking back on this
i dont regret a thing
i cherise every moment
and cant wait for the ones to come
this love is different its not everyday guy meets girl
story
this story is different its special
is our to have and to hold
nobody can take it away

When my eyes forst glazed her and i felt her words float through me
when my her presense made me feel happy
when she made me smile
i knew
somehow i knew she was specail
she was different
she is the one
and she is  my true love
and will be for the rest of ever

I LOVE YOU RACHELLE

with all my heart
thank you for loving me
and sharring this expierience with me
this is our story
well its just the beggining
and will never end

when my eyes first meet with her
i knew
i knew that this was the beggining of something wonderful and amazing
I knew
it was a spark
now a raging infurno
inside my beating heart and soul
and it beats for her
i live for her
i couldnt without her
i love her

When my eyes first meet with hers
and i mean really meet with hers
when i saw them looking at me
into me
seeing me for who i really am
I knew it was love at first sight
i didnt know what it was then
but looking back now i know
it was love at first sight
that moment i knew she was special
the one

When our eyes connected

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  • Melissa Burns
    November 13

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    I always appluad for luv

    Okay I am impressed (and here I am again - reading all your privateish thoughts, sorry) that you wrote something this long with such feeling - not that I know you of course, but that you sat down and did it. You are obviously very much in love and I wish you (both) all the best!!!!


  • A Citys Ember
    November 4

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    oh my goddd.
    I don't even know what to say, this is just amazing babe, and I never knew you were sort of nervous and all plan-y back then =]
    I love how you used 'I think I'm falling in love with you' my exact words, you remembered ^^
    Ohh I can't wait to see you.
    And try to show you how much you mean to me, because words fail me, but do you so much justice, I love this so much!
    But I definitely love you way more <3

    • Awe thanks you so much baby, that means alot to me, you really know how to say and and respond the right way to make me smile, my heart skips a beat every time we say i love you^^ thanks darling i love you so much