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What Willy Do? A poet-fictional dioalogue




willy, what will you do?
willy, are you a liar?
willy, i wake up in the wee hours of the morning, wondering
is you intent true to your word?
willy, you had me convinced
can i believe in you?
you owe me money now, mister
mister willy
what will you do?
are you just another homeless nobody,
lying through your non-teeth?
will you call on me tomorrow,
having a pile of money, as you promised?
will you call on me and take me to lunch and pay back the loan?
do you have the check now, that you spoke so surely of?

[his voice, his fictional words, in my mind...]

"no
cracker
no

i  use ta
fo da dough

if ah see
ya inna sto

i ass you
fo sum mo"






Giving is not bad, but when he presents a lie to obtain?

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