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Life and its bill

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Mollification
was the refuse
that he had been left with
wings of worries
fluttered
and he had erred
wronged fatally
and now rued
fate has roads
on which
luck travels
his had halted
he felt
completely
bitter and salted
some pay in life
other with life
he was moving
from 'in' to 'with' life
scare hurt him bad
as he iced sad
he wanted to run
like a jackal
that had his
howls
all arrested
and on gun
he could not
stayed still
and lead life
and its bill.

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and lead life
and its bill.

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  • Babies Blues
    November 16
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    mollification with wings of worry... interesting write and easy to read...I like


  • fiona8 silver member
    November 4

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    Liking this. Line breaks are awesome. Interesting poetics. Leading with the bill...
    wings of worries
    fluttered
    rued
    fate has roads