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That woman, holding her baby to her face, as she kisses the child’s face; I saw the back of baby’s shiny newborn head, and in perhaps the most beautiful view of life, as underneath a twisty cloud of the softest dark hair, she kissed her baby, she looked past her baby, she peaked from her baby to see me seeing her love, and rejoicing.






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  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 8

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a gorgeous image to have captured I really like the way that you have presented this with such a simple joy - it shines through this work and makes it a beautiful thing to read

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 6

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    welcome to AP! this a great start to a very promising engagement with the site. Thanks for sharing. let me know If I can be of any help!!!
    peace and light,
    Kendal

  • Annorlunda
    November 4
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    A very nice image, well presented poetically.