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Bukowski; Modest Mowski



Bukowski.

slows down my brain

enough to

comprehend

every

word

that is

being said


in my head.





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  • rollingzen
    November 4
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    actually I think it's the other way around....Bukowski's 'poetry' appeals to slow brains!lol!

  • Annorlunda
    November 4

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    It is a strange coincidence that I was reading some of Charles Bukowski's works today, after they were mentioned in a comment on one of my poems. So it is quite eerie that Bukowski has sprung up yet again...

    But I like the lay-out of this, it really helped with the fluency of the poem.