your're a kaleidoscope of colors
mixing into my emotions like ice cream dreams
wonderful dreamlike songs from the seventies
only the smallest of particles
escaping on the tip of my tongue
helping me to forget the past
one more time and one more time
over and agonizing over again
Neapolitan in a big round bowl
and the smallest of spoons to make it last forever
Tell me What you think
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I used to love eating my icecream with a tiny spoon
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Fabulous
This was a really cheery, brighten-up-your-day kinda poem. I absolutely loved the picture, it was just so imaginative. And then to tie that in with your poem was intelligent writing. I particularly liked the phrase 'ice cream dreams', that just sounds so nice! And the Neapolitan metaphor was original and beautifully constructed to finish off the poem in a dulcet fashion. Rarely have I enjoyed reading a poem so much. Fantastic
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wow....okay so this is heart stopping...layer over layer of fragility....mix up all the colours sweets....devour it....get it on your face...your clothes....and rejoice in your right to happiness
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