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Hey there !

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Hey there!
Where did you go?
You left me standing
I had a surprise for you on our wedding day
But you left me standing all alone
We talk about a lot of things before you left
How you wanted to have kids maybe 2 or 3
But at least one Girl
You hope she had my eyes

   I said I hope she has your strength to go one with life
I went to the doctor that morning

because he did some test
He didn’t tell me what until the day of our wedding
I sat and cried because I was happy
I hurried and told my Momma

that I need to see you
She said you will see him in a couple of hours
So I waited and waited and then one of the guys came in and said He not here
I look at him and the tears flow
He was so upset that he cried with me
He said he doesn’t know what gotten into your head
Running off leaving a bride standing
He knew that he was my life
So he stays by my side
When a couple of hours went by
Everyone left the wedding is over
I pack my dress and sent it away
For I knew I wouldn’t never marry
I told your best friend that you left me standing
As I carry your child he so much wanted
He stays by me as a true friend does
He even offer marriage
My heart belong to the babies father
Hey there you hear me?
You are a father
Twins girls pretty as can be
One name sunshine
And a daughter name
Buttercup
Remember you wanted them to be name
So since we had two
I gave them both the names
Hey there!
Where you been?
Too bad you wasn’t here
You would have love to seen your daughters
Proud and strong
Loving and caring
They pray every night
For their Daddy
Hey There!
Where you been?
You have two daughters
They have grown and married
Guess what
They both carrying twins

I'm trying to write a lyric for a freind of mine in the music world

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  • Theolinda
    November 9
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    Aw sis, this was sad. Bad enough for the bride but later for the daughters he will never know it is a real shame. Makes you wonder how many times this has happened in real life! I always love your work, it is as if you are talking to me in person.Love you.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 4
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    WONDERFUL!!!!

    This is so sad yet would make a song very beautiful and heartfelt.

  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 4

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    Wow, Mom, this is really a great song!
    Just totally fabulous and so interesting!
    Great job on these lyrics, might be a famous song for someone?