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In a Basement on Pennsylvania Avenue

My friend i know him well,
i see him go through his own personal hell,
drinks away his days,
past 10 years were all a haze.

I see him stumble when he walks,
i see him slur his words when he talks,
i see him alone in a corner sitting in his chair,
i see him sitting with his worldly stare.

You see he has not been in one place,
since the tragedy came and went,
his days wondering he has spent,
even though hes not well,
his kindness he has always lent,
what will it take to get him out of this spell,
i guess it will take a while,
to see that even though she is gone
its not all bad ,
there is still some happiness to be had.

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  • xxvampyregirlxx
    December 1
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    very sad i like it thanks for the entry and goodluck in the contest


  • Tzipora
    November 5
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    well written. i liked this alot. sad sad story but very well done. never stop writing.