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Birthday Photo

We lit the candles on her cake.
I held the camera up to take
A picture of her blow them out
And heard her father's fearful shout;
"Her hair is on fire! Quick! Help!"
Then Birthday Girl began to yelp
As flames engulfed her little face.
Her birthday dress was burning lace
And no more than a gown on fire.
In seconds raging flames rose higher.
I heard her splutter, released the shutter...
A tragedy - she screamed and cried.
I took the picture as she died.

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  • phylumasylum
    November 6
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    beautiful

    i loved it!

  • Before i give my comment please put which title you used as inspiration.

    • Noim
      November 9
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      The titles I used as inspiration are listed in my comment on the competition page.