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your hand in mine


I took your hand in mine,
Looking deeply,
I got lost in your eyes.
I guess you can never be sure,
When it comes to love
Cause right there for a moment,
I forgot how far the fall could be.

There are many things I have seen
and done,
But never did I think
I might find someone like you.
On the run so many times before,
I wish you knew how good it feels.

I gave you my feelings plain and simple,
Waiting for you to say something,
Fear washed over me for a moment.
You put you hand on my cheek and tilted my chin,
It was then I leaned in.
Our first kiss, so simple and sweet.

There are many things I will never forget,
There are many things that I haven’t said yet,
But there is always comes truth when I look at you,
And say that I love you.

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  • i loveee this. it sums my life up into words like those. this is very well worded and i love it. good luck in the contest. (i wish my poems were this good)


  • VampireKitty-
    November 4

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    AWWW..this is cute very well done..but i am looking for a poem to tell him i love him so like no kissing or holding hands but i really do love your poem this is a beatifeal write..good luck