For years now I have tried to find myself
In everything and everyone
Only to finally realize I don't exist in this world
I do not belong
My heart has been broken beyond all repair
and all I have left is in a big bottle of dispair
Author notes
After years of soul-searching, I finally found myself…
I dug a six-foot, deep hole, and I was there.
by David Hall aka Poetic-Theorm
Reserve...
I need to think a bit on this prompt I will finish by today's end.
A contest entry
- ~ * my dark quote is your prompt * ~ by Poetic-Theorem.
700 points, ended November 4, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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short and touching..really awesomee.....great work
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i loved this
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Excellent penning!
Powerful words that I can relate to so very well..very dark but also profoundly true for very many people.."big bottle of dispair"..great metaphor that can be taken in several ways depending upon the reader..Very well done
Wish you the best in the contest...David
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