Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Lights And More Lights

Oh how I love to go dancing
Up high among the stars
Waltzing away at midnight
To Jupiter and Mars

I like to do a little tap
As I dance from point to point
Trying not to stretch too far
I don't want to pull a joint

Oh how lovely is the sky
With it's jewels all aglow
Shining down so elegantly
On the sleepy earth below

I think I'll ask the morning star
To glitter herself all aglow
And shine and shine through all her time
Shining her love on  earth below

Author notes

#1 Title

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Truetome
    November 26
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    maybe the star shall grant your wish.... love,


  • SmileEnjoy
    November 4

    Edit | Reply
    Wow. very good, it's simpler and pure. With beautiful words. I love poems like these, because to me space seem magical and i hate it when all the scientists suck all the magic out of it with the "facts". anyway getting off topic here this is a great poem. Best of luck in the contest!


    • Katie Lazette
      November 4
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you SmileEnjoy for reading and commenting on my poem. Glad you liked my poem.