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Divine Waves

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To step back in time, before human mind

when cosmic energy created all we see

pure Divinity one breath of unity

expanding outward from itself

deathless souls in human shell

speck of Creator, spark of I Am

illuminating energy through I Am command

waves of light manifesting to form

absorbing nothing creates and transforms.

Small source of energy creates what one sees

super source of energy creates waves in unity.

Proton, neutron, electron is Trinity

quarks move unseen balance reality.

 

 

We are but pieces of the Whole,

further we move away from source

the more confused we become,

we lose our connection;

we become dependant on form,

we become as animals defending ourselves,

attaching ourselves to what our perception

believes is needed.

Life is simply to experience.

Life is a struggle because we have made

it as such.

We indeed create what we see,

as we walk away from God

we feel eternal mourning,

we try to fill this void with superficial,

as we grow spiritually we lose  attachment to form,

we lose love for temporal,

we turn around and go home.

 

 

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  • penman gold member
    November 20
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    Excellent

    wow, such a beautifully written poem. So very creative and upliftin to read. You always do such a great job with your words and thoughts. best of luck in the contest


  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 14

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    Beautiful words portraying the connectivity of all - the matrix and the mind of One behind. I especially liked:

    'waves of light manifesting to form
    absorbing nothing creates and transforms.'


  • MsChrispy
    November 7

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    wow

    Amazing poem! I'm not good at leaving comments, lol. All I can say is I really liked it, keep them coming cause I love your work, your rhymes, the way it flows. See you later. - Chris

  • Excellent

    Great work my friend your light is getting brighter, keep going Good luck in the contest I like the poetry in it and I thought this was a good poem . a powerful piece of work.. very well done Alexander QQ....


  • lonestar silver member
    November 4

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    You pen the truth so very well and always approach it from your own angle to give that extra special flair. You should write professionally. I would love to buy your books some day or see it in a library. I would like, one day,to go thru the Dewey Decimal System and see my name under mental illness.

    God's Blessings!

    ~steve~


  • Providence
    November 4

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    Ah The divine trinity as spoken by the prophets and as Einstein saw it. A profound piece of poetry that ignites the words and the spirit!

    You are going deep now.

    Bravo, dear poet.

    Marianne


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 4

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    VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Your lovely words bring to my mind a quote by Einstein which goes something like this- the more I study the universe the more I believe in a higher power-


  • Nicada silver member
    November 4

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    The message you share here is so important for spiritual growth and enlightenment in our lives. You put a great deal of thought and care into your words here. Very nicely written poem! Blessings, Patty


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    November 4
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    A most beautiful and profound write---
    Very well written and an inspirational read!
    Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • Rovingone gold member
    November 4

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    Well! A philosophy lesson in a poem. We do indeed make the visions we see of life, the world and all that surround us and walking further from the source makes it mighty murky. You are so right!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 4

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    we do create all the havoc in our lives for we walk away from God.. and fill it with earthly things and never stop to thing it is heaven we need.. this is stunning and such a great message Kathy thank you for sharing your wisdom Hugs always Angel♥


  • irishbtch
    November 4

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    great write, flowed amazingly well in the first stanza. Although I am not religious, I can feel the faith out into it. keep up the good work.

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