My arms wrap around you, forming a barrier,
your body folded into mine,
I don't want you to escape,
because loving you is so divine.
I love the manly scent of you,
I inhale you like a rose,
these feelings you give me are so blissful,
and make me want to curl my toes.
I've never known such ecstasy,
as I do when we're as one,
and I cherish every moment,
as you so sweetly bring me home.
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Credit artist: Tony Chow
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So tender, blissful, and beautiful.
A lot of passion unfurling
within..
made for such a sweet read.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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wonderfully penned write
isn't the scent of the man you love the most wonderful thing in the world, intoxicating...mmm yum lol
best of luck to you in this contest, and thank you for your kind words on my latest
Tasha
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Warm and lush imagery you offer the reader. I truly like the idea of a person being "home"! This is deeply sensual and beautiful. Geo
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i love people who can write sensualy without writing vulgarity. i think you created a perfect testimant to the picture that was givin as your inspiration. great job on another beautiful write.
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once again nice job
you always seem to capture the words within the picture i couldnt have put it any better than you. you are a great poet and i pray to read more great works to come. -
Ahhh to be young again and be able to bend and move with such grace. When you get old like me the manly smell becomes Ben-Gay and to make a woman feel ecstasy you have to pour coffee in her lap....LOL.
Another poetic write from such a talented poet. Good luck in the contest
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A beautifully phrased sensual write which breathes life into the picture--
Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!
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Thanks so much for the great comment and the applause. I really appreciate it!
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