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Happy Birthday Perfect Sunset.

Hope this day brings you,
All the happiness it can.
Perhaps your muse will come to life,
Perhaps you'll make a friend.
Your birthday is a special day,
  a day that's just for you.

Boldy take a stand today,
In everything you do.
Round off the day with birthday cake,
To celebrate the coming year.
Here you stand so strong and tall,
Dare to smile all day, don't cry a single tear.
Anyways, just wanted to wish you all the best,
You turn 21 only once, so have fun, then get some rest.

Written for Perfect Sunset. May your birthday be a happy one.

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Happy birthday sweetie. Hope it's filled with love and happiness.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 10
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    Aww thank you so very much
    for this beautiful, beautiful
    poem! I am going to print this,
    along with all the others out
    and put them in an album.

    You are so kind hun!

    Thanks again for brightening my day


  • victorbuhagiar
    November 6

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    Succint and to the point. Rest can be so elusive so it is an apt wish for a 21 birthday.

    Victo


  • no more name
    November 5

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    Oh God 21 that was a long time ago for me. When I was 21 we didn't have cake we had mud pie with dinosuar burgers. Who ever is having the birthday congrads.
    A very sweet poem for a birthday. Well done my friend.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 5

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    aww sweet and this poem is amazing , i lovwe it and it a beautiful.
    A really great write
    -penguin-


  • Mr. Kodak
    November 4

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    Great

    a birthday is a very special day of the year and 21 is a very good age and step into adulthood. people realize when they are that age that they can do anything within their life within reason but they have to do it on their own. it is at that time they walk on their own and light their own way. nice writing

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