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My Gingerbread Man

Good looking guy, standing there,

Is so sweet, I want to stare.

Nice smile he's got, and pretty eyes.

Good muscle tone, and great behind!

Even though that's just his looks,

Really I think I might be hooked.

Be right back, I have to leave,

Right after I grab my keys.

Eeveryone turns to see,

As he bumps right into me.

Dang! I say, it's all I can....

       I think I've found my gingerbread man.

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Prompt: ~gingerbread~

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 16
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    hehe this was cute and very
    well done on the rhyme.

    I also like how you've
    made this an acrostic poem.

    Love it!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • no more name
    November 5

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    Okay - Now you've ruined the gingerbread man for me I can never eat another one without getting sick....lol. As a matter of fact I can't admit to ever eating one again not after this poem...lol


  • beautifubrokenangel
    November 5

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    Awesome

    Hey girl i love this poem. It made me smile. You are such a good writter.


  • Mr. Kodak
    November 4

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    hahaha

    this one made me laugh cause all i can remember was the story of the gingerbread man when i was a little kid so you brought me some good memories back nice job...great writing again


  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 4
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    *reaches into bag*


    ..............


    ~gingerbread~

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