You are with the stars in the sky
I look up as you shine down
I tear up and you rain down
You saved me pain
You showed me how
I heard you go
Are you happy now?
Not so easy to say goodbye
Is this the way I should live my life?
And She'll never know her daddy's eyes
My name on your lips,
It should have been hers
You've no idea the dreams you hurt
Unable to sleep
Curled up in a ball
My tears cannot fall
Because like you said.
When one goes up
The other comes down
Well we both came down together
What happens now?
Author notes
Umm... Yeah hard to write. I don't know how I feel about it right now.
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this is very deep. very emotional. i really like this a lot. i really got into it. thank you so much for entering and good luck
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