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Where'd She Go?

I look at the way you've grown,
three years old and so independent.
I miss the way you used to need me,
where'd my little girl go?

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 9

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    aww this is deep, sweet,
    and sentimental.

    great work

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • no more name
    November 5

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    I felt the same as I watched my two daughters grow. It seems that one minute you are there hero and the next your just in the way. At 15 and 10 years old they seem to have no need for me at all. Well except for my wallet - that they need...lol


  • Mr. Kodak
    November 4

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    Remembering the younger years

    we all miss those times where we didnt have no bills to pay nothing to worry about and no drama in our lives 3 years old is the perfect age and if i could go back to it i would only because it was probably the best of times back in the olden days. good writing


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    November 4

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    i think that all the time about my girls, my youngest is 20 and its like I still remember her being this 5 lb bunddle of joy, lawd I miss them days, beautiful poem and a pleasure to read,I wish you much luck in the contest xoxo

    I miss the way you used to need me,
    where'd my little girl go?

    I so loved this lines, not a day dont go by I dont miss that little girl of mine


  • Nicada silver member
    November 4

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    It is hard to watch them grow up so quickly and become more and more independent. But remember it is a good thing in the end that she has the confidence to "do it all by herself!" Thanks for sharing this. Blessings, Patty

    • Thanks so much for the comment and the applause. I do miss her being dependant on me for everything but I am proud of her at the same time for being able to do the things she does, if that makes sense. It doesn't matter though, because no matter how old she gets she will always be my little girl!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    November 4

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    They do grow up fast don't they!?
    A lot of emotion and imagery with a minimum of words--
    Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!

    • Yes they do, and I just wonder if every time one of my babies gets to that independent stage if I am going to want another one lol.

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