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doubt

Are you mad?! I can't write a poem in six lines!
God took six DAYS to create the world,
I'm to do the same in only SIX LINES? And How long should
these supposed lines be, may I ask? Three, four, five... words?!
Well, I better stop wasting my SIX LINES and get started:

She was as beautiful as all the mornings put together....

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 10

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    Oh my....this is a little postage stamp masterpiece...refreshing and memorable.....really cleverly sculpted
    Take a bow
    T


    • rrw gold member
      November 22
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      Thanks, RK! I like jumping out of the box a lot... even though I never know where I might land!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 9
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    Hehe this was great!
    love where you went with
    this.. comical, and yet
    full of sentiment.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck

    • rrw gold member
      November 22
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      PS, you always inspire me... even if sometimes its in an off the wall way!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 6
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    Creativity on the loose again! All the best in the contest!


  • Aedara-Wren silver member
    November 5

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    you can get a lot into six lines :-p This is a marvellous ode to written procrastination I think. I also want to know where the six lines after the last one would have taken us.

    • rrw gold member
      November 22
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      Well, I stuck that line away to use in its own poem... it is intriguing to me.


  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    November 4
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    brilliant! i love it!! one of the best short pieces ive read in a while ^^


    • rrw gold member
      November 22
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      thanks , shad! Sometimes the greatest inspiration... is to have none at all.... but still write!


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 4
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    HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! YOU


  • whitecoffee
    November 4
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