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Into Luxurious Light

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As a child, I knew how to soar within dreams,
arms aloft to catch the filtered rays of the sun
as I ascended past the reach of shadows
that lay crumpled far below.

I grew older, forgetting the freedom

I once knew so well, submerged in darkness,

remembering solace found within light.

There are those within my churning circle
who pluck feathers from their own silvered wings
to fashion a pair for me, so that I might fly once more.

As I looked into their glistened eyes, 

I remembered the defeat of gravity, the thermals which lift me

into skies well above the cautious horizon.

The rustled leaves of your voice whispered,
their timbre trembling in my ear.

 

 

II.

 

 

Demagogues deny this clarity, these passions so pure,
as though they were merely vagaries of soul,
dormant, intractable as truth.

Tumultuous tides ascend, a crescendo of shimmers 

far too supple to suppose as ponderous alchemy.


Inebriated within your febrile eyes,
I am become primal - lithe under your thrum,
a provocative pulse descends along my throat,

an umbrage of flesh made less than fragile.

I succumb to these catacombs of chaotic flames,

this succor of infinite curls beyond ferocity.

 

 

III.

 

 

Branches may bow under tempest's wrath;

their grief awaits sophisticated sunlight

to rise once more.

 

 

 

 


 

 

Author notes


 
  
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prompt: "Dancing Round the Light"
 
 
"Dancing Round the Fire"
 
by CarolDesjarlais 
 
 
darkness settles itself 
and a woman struts her beauty
before an ancient fire whose ashes
know from whence they come

fire draws such as you and I

we have a choice
touch and be burned
or have light shed on us

I have danced with hot feet
until blisters dropped me to my knees

I have received the shine
that comes from revolting scars

my best bet
is to dance in spite of it

near enough to be warmed
by my own reflection
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Danny Beatty gold member
    November 7

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    i thoroughly enjoy it when you write these vignettes, releasing their fortitude with grace and admiration for the form.

    congratulations on your bronze, my baby.



  • simone waters
    November 7

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    What an elegant remembering, Scribe...how gorgeously, knowingly you craft your pen

    sighs... Congratulations, Scribe.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 7

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    Oh, yes, of course...gravity analogy..spectacular! And, I am aware of our temporary thermals, as well. Such woman-speak! You know where this one needs to find its honored space, right?

  • Lord Gegishov
    November 6

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    There are so many beautiful and insightful moments in this poem that when I read it again to find the parts I enjoyed the most, I was forced to concede that I loved the piece equally, from beginning to end. How you balance these heavy words with the beautiful lightness of hope!!


  • penman gold member
    November 6

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    Excellent

    You took a waltz around the flame and held our hands along the way. Warm and vibrant and glorious write. Many blessings in the contest


  • meic
    November 5

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    The prompt poem is gorgeous: your response equally so ... both have poetic grace and firm structure. Yet each poem is entrely true to itself ... as always your word-choice is superb and your rhythm irresistible.

    Good luck
    Mike


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    November 5

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    So many images come to mind reading your poetry.

    So much richness.


  • kaibab silver member
    November 4

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    Howerev the dance it is the music that finds the legs as instrument...and such a night we have had of it...I want to do it again...lovely scribe

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