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Numb

I cry in the darkness
drowning in thoughts of you
& how you kiss her,love her
hug her,you make all her pain
dissappear,but you could never
see the love that I had for you
& how badly it hurts,
I can't even describe the pain
that I feel right now
I can't even sleep anymore
because of you
every time she smiles,I cry
every time she kisses you I die
as her heart is filled with love
mine is filled with pain
I never knew that
it would hurt this much
my heart bleeds now
but I know that
I will never love again
I can't feel anything
because thanks to you
I'm finally numb

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  • kryz
    November 4
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    Great job.

  • nice chice of words, i KNOW the feeling, love sucks


  • Roseamongweeds
    November 4
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    That hurts me, and I'm only reading this! Great job, you portray your emotions well with your choice of words.