my imagination is full of lust and want
needing this in you more and more
i am a bucket of nervous hot splashing tears
pouring all over the ground like a hot cup of coffee
too hot to hold -too damn hot!
the burn is intense but i will not let go
it cost me nearly five bucks Dammit
but that's not the reason why
-why i hold onto you for dear life is a fact (that)
i am sure i have fallen
-positive of one true certainty
i'll never love again until -You
Author notes
Have you ever thought about ten million things at once, and then got lost on one train of thought?
-Our minds are beguiling and so very painful.
Tell me What you think
Comments
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All the time!!! This is beautiful!
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The 'bucket of nervous hot splashing tears' was an amazing metaphor, and I like how you compared it to a cup of coffee. Great stuff!
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I am a bucket of nervous hot splashing tears
sweet jesus...that is a line that will stay with me forever...this is incredible...it makes me ache ..its raw beauty is breathtaking....This is my new fave of yours
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the mind sometimes seems to have a mind of its own and what it wishes can never be put aside...your words touch and leave a hint of longing for a love not yet yours...
thank you for sharing this with me..i enjoyed it very much
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