Dearest,
as you read this I hope
my eyes are staring into yours
I hope you feel something now
I hope you feel something more
than the friendship we had
I hope you see there was more
than the fun times we had
I hope the pain is more
than you’ve ever had
I take that back, my love
I could never wish you pain
I’m sorry I hurt you
I wish I could remain
but I could not live without you
longing to taste your kiss
to feel you pressed against me
to bask in true love’s bliss
so I seek an endless sleep
I seek eternal respite
from the despair that surrounds
me in it’s arms through the night
so, my dearest
this is goodbye
sincerely yours
tis time to die..
And the page slipped from his hands
from his chest slipped the cries
of despair and pain and hate for himself
as he looked into her eyes
his love lay now before him
her skin cold and dry
he cursed himself as he read again
“my dearest, this is goodbye”
what a fool he was
to deny the things he felt
to fold the winning hand
he had finally been dealt
so he picked up the gun
and took her hand, so dead
still gazing into her eyes
he placed the barrel to his head
the sky was dark
the wind was chilled
the moon shone far above
and with the slightest fingers twitch
he declared to her his love
What did you think
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i love it
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wow! this has great imagery....
its really beautiful work, it needs no change.
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amazing
Tis, a sad solution to lose a life to such desperate love but to death the love flourished. nice i give this poem a 5 out of 5 * poem. it is very good i suggest no change.
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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i love this, it paints a picture in my head.
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omg. i love this. very beasutiful. toyching
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